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| Subject: Newt Bio (DONE) April 14th 2015, 17:28 | |
| Name: NewtGender: Male Age: 3 YearsPack: Agavos
Rank Requested: Caretaker
Appearance: Standing at 82 cm tall from his shoulder down to his paws Newt is a tall wolf. His build isn't bold and tough it is rather lanky with quiet small paws, weighing around 45 pounds makes him quiet skinny. Long legs are helpful for running but he tends to stay away from it because of his injured right back leg. Gaining a small limp from it as he runs along, which makes him quiet slow. Newt's fur is very fluffy and long in the winter time as where in the summer time his coat sheds and it is quiet thin. The brute also has quiet a thick and gruff British accent.
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History:
Previous History Three years ago in a small den on the west side of a mountain, Newt was born along with a sister. From day of birth he was always a healthy little pup that loved to play around and stay active. The small pup tended to stay outside wandering around and trying to discover something new every day, whether it was how fish breathe underwater or to how a small bird learns to fly by being ran off the edge of a tree limb. The small brute tended to get into tons of trouble because of his curiosity, it sometimes even led to deadly situations to wear he would almost get hurt or killed. As a puppy he was always cheerful and happy and never had any concept of death or pain at the time as everyone would avoid the subject when he would ask a question about it. As a pup he would try to hang out mostly around his mother as she was the lead caretaker of the pack, this gave him many chances to make new friends and bond with the others. Newt still didn't know what rank he wanted to take up as a kid many times he thought a hunter or maybe a guardian but after seeing how many friends he had made from his mothers job, he decided he wanted to be a caretaker.
Newt grew over a few years gaining new looks and a lot of attention from the females in his pack, the brute honestly didn't like that girls were throwing themselves at him so for some of his teenage years he just ignored it and kept his head held high. It started to seem as if the days grew longer and that everything was changing, no one really had done anything around since the brute had grown. The once cheerful yippy pack that was always on a move grew dull and lifeless in a matter of years scaring him quiet a lot. The dark days came that's when Newt realized how sick and twisted this whole world was after attempting to escape a pack ambush, he hurt is back hind leg in the process of doing so. The brute gained a nasty reward from all of that, a limp for the rest of his life.
Another year passed and the male decided instead of traveling farther west that he would go toward the North to discover what secrets it holds. The journey took around three to four weeks with his bad leg. Despite everything that had happened to him, boy did he have amazing stories to tell and would spread them to anyone who came by as a friend instead of an enemy. The brute had trudged through miles and miles of snow throughout his journey facing many other such s foxes, bears, and sometimes other pack of wolves. Deciding it was time to stop lugging around with nothing to do, he set out in search of a new pack not knowing where his paws would take him.
Recent History After the tri-colored brute found Agavo's border and was greeted by there Elite Fel he was accepted within the pack and is currently living the life as an official pack member of Agavos. Granted with the rank of Caretaker, he began to explore the territory starting at the healers den meeting yet another wolf who went by the name of Sofiel. Newt stayed in the healer's den for a good day as the fae Sofiel helped him and began to converse with her, he became quiet comfortable with Sofiel and has gladly accepted her as his own friend. The brute is yet to meet others within the pack such as his alpha and the others but for now he is perfectly fine with the people he has met so far.
Joining Keys: Joining keys present and removed - Elite Nnlya
How did you find Age? I found you guys from Top 50 Wolf RPG's and Decided to give it a go
Example Post: The brute had padded through a cold snowy wasteland along his journey breathing in the cool air ever so lightly when he walks. Scanning the surrounding the male quickly fund the area as barren with no real signs of life, this taking him nowhere he deiced to journey onward in search of more land. Cold, Tired, Hungry, and Thirsty, Newt finally came to halt deciding to rest. Silently he crawled into an abandoned fox den curling up into a ball and resting. A few hours later the tall brute decided it was time to go and get out of the snow as it was only going to grow as he walked, it began to snow more little white crystallized flakes fell from the sky landing on his pelt. Letting out muffled profanities of all kinds he continued on growing more and more eager to find what lies ahead maybe death? A home? It didn't really matter to Newt right now he would accept either one. If death came along so be it, he honestly didn’t really freaking care about himself anymore, as he had lost all hope and confidence but he kept venturing on. It didn’t take the brute long to catch the scent of other wolves as he came to the border, but no signs of the mysterious scents sighing he sat down hoping to give himself a rest. Finally reaching his destination he lifted his muzzle letting a howl escape his chops in hope of at least an answer.[/font]
Last edited by Autay Newt on August 10th 2015, 18:36; edited 14 times in total (Reason for editing : Added Example post & Fixed Run On Sentences) |
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Elder Azul Site Owner
Posts : 838 Join date : 2012-12-15 Age : 36 Location : Camden, SC
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| Subject: Re: Newt Bio (DONE) April 15th 2015, 04:40 | |
| It is required for you to have an example post. |
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| Subject: Re: Newt Bio (DONE) April 15th 2015, 07:14 | |
| My bad, I was quiet busy around the time I had done this. Ihave fixed it now |
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Quinn Of Helidos Administrator
Posts : 214 Join date : 2014-04-26
| Subject: Re: Newt Bio (DONE) April 15th 2015, 07:28 | |
| Welcome Newt, but before you can be accepted, there are some things you will have to adjust:
- So Newt is three years old, but in your bio you stated "a couple years" each time more changes happened to him. - Though you show the different areas of your wolf's life, if like to see more detail about his training. What made him want to be a caretaker or what training did he get? - In order to have a limp, you must purchase it in the Shopette. But since you do not have enough bones, you will have to wait until the point when you get enough. - You have a lot of run-on sentences, so please watch out for this. I suggest editing the ones you find. - Your example post is not long enough. Please adjust that.
Once you make the changes, a member of the staff will review your application. |
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| Subject: Re: Newt Bio (DONE) April 19th 2015, 16:45 | |
| Fixed everything listed here, once I get enough bones I shall go and purchase his limp since it is quiet big within his history but until then I just left it in his bio and will not use it in RP until I purchase it |
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Elder Azul Site Owner
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| Subject: Re: Newt Bio (DONE) April 21st 2015, 11:48 | |
| Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:- Name Claim- RanksOnce you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post! |
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