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PostSubject: Amatis The Vigilant Amatis The Vigilant Icon_minitimeOctober 24th 2015, 10:22

Name: Amatis

Gender: Female

Age: 4

Pack: Pyrvanthros

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance:
Standing just shy of 70 cm, Amatis is a soft colored Eurasian wolf, could be said to be in the middle of an average wolf and a small wolf. Although her size is could be slightly less intimidating than say a larger wolf, her large personality takes up for what she can lack in size. Her fur is a unique array of colors, starting with a charcoal black on her legs and up to her chest and face. Although among the thick fur on her neck and shoulders there can be hints of brown seen through out her fur. Her fur gets long towards her tail and hind quarters, which has the same black but a lighter more cinnamon colored fur. The brown pops out when the sun is shining high, but with the brown the under fur of her coat is a silky silver color. This is color is from her father's side of the family and was often quite rare among her siblings. Her eyes are a soft honey brown color which to her is quite rare among wolves. In the light they turn into a soft amber color, and in the darkness they are a almost muddy brown color.

Lanky, and lean her build was that of a hunter, but her will is that of a warrior. Amatis was stubborn, even from the very beginning and when it came to training it was go big or go home. Her stubborness often got in the way of her normally quiet self. She was often observant, watching and learning. Being observant often lead her to be quiet which was never a bad thing. She was often bombarded by her chatty sisters, and it was always annoying to see them talking all the time. Amatis could get irritated often by her larger sisters, and while she was lean and lanky they had gotten the larger more thicker figures from their mother. Amatis was in retrospect, just like her father. Despite being told that hunter was best for her, she trained under a good eye and was able to force herself to build up her muscle mass and become a warrior. While she often enjoyed a good run, it was easy for her to out run most of the pack, especially when in scrimmages against other packs.


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Born in late spring, Amatis was accompanied by two sisters, and a brother. Amatis was the smallest of the group, but a fighter. They were born to a healthy fae named Tess, who was very madly in love with her mate Lucas. Lucas had been very proud to see four healthy pups, and knew that his dying lineage would continue on for a few more years. Lucas and Tess raised their pups with two other fae wolves who had pups about the same time. Each had two pups which in all was quite a large litter of pups for the small pack. The pack had been downsized early on from a disastrous snow storm a couple of months before. The pack had lost nearly everything, but with will and determination they were able to hold strong. It had been the talk of the year, and while Amatis was growing up it was often told to her in reminder of how lucky she was to be alive. While her siblings enjoyed hearing different versions of the story, Amatis grew bored of it quite quickly. She was about seven months old at the time, and was itching to be able to go out and be with nature. She had pestered their healer about what it was like outside of camp, seeing as he was often gone and he would often shoo her away. Amatis being stubborn, would often just get what she wanted before leaving.

She was impatient to grow up, and when she was finally able to train she was taken under her father's care. He was a proud warrior, but he had pushed himself to hard over the years and was often training when he could relax afterwards. He trained his daughter for a year and a half, before passing her on to his brother. His brother trained her for another year, until he thought she was ready to be a warrior. When finally able to call herself a warrior, the pack she had come to love was attacked by the neighboring pack. Amatis had never hurt another wolf, and when the challenge came, she fought without batting an eye. She had mentally prepared herself to kill, but the chance never came. The small group had battled the larger and was able to push them out of the territory. Amatis was bruised and battered, but she had been successful in helping push the other pack out of their territory. They celebrated that night, but instead of being victorious or joyous, Amatis was quiet. While the other wolves danced and played, she watched. While she was happy, there was always the impending darkness inside of her telling her to go enjoy fighting. Go enjoy watching the blood drip from a lifeless form. The quiet she-wolf felt very alone.

Another year slipped carelessly by, and Amatis was being pressured to find a mate by her sisters and mother. Her older sister was already pregnant and expecting pups, and her other sister had a mate. They were pushing it upon her to find a mate and pass on her genes. They often pointed out which male wolf would be the best suitor, and Amatis had found a hatred for it. The prodding and pushing made her feel sick. Love wasn't something that could be forced, and with it going on she decided that being along was better than being apart of her natal pack. She said her good byes, discreetly and disappeared. While on her journey, she did feel some regret but not enough to ever turn back. She wandered for little under a year, passing through many packs finding new information and even new skills. But alas, her longing for a pack grew tirelessly. She found herself drawn to new lands, and a new pack. Coming upon Pryvanthros, she felt it could be destiny.  


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PostSubject: Re: Amatis The Vigilant Amatis The Vigilant Icon_minitimeOctober 25th 2015, 22:14

The only things I see this needing is: You need to state what breed of wolf Amatis is and you never describe her eyes in any way during the post. Fix these things and a staff member will look at this once more.
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PostSubject: Re: Amatis The Vigilant Amatis The Vigilant Icon_minitimeOctober 26th 2015, 15:14

Updated M'dear. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Amatis The Vigilant Amatis The Vigilant Icon_minitimeOctober 26th 2015, 15:16

Amatis The Vigilant R0it

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