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Omega Twist
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PostSubject: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 27th 2015, 22:42

Name: Twist

Gender: Female

Age: 3 years

Pack: Agavos

Rank Requested: Omega

Appearance:
The damsel is quite stunning for her younger age. Her facial features holds much beauty, along with the rest of her body. Her muzzle is long, yet small looking, clearly showing her Mexican wolf features. Her eyes seem hooded, like she is always holding a mischievous gleam, but the are bold sapphire blue. Moving down along her body, her frame is petite and short, but her long brawny legs give off the illusion that she is tall from a certain distance.

Her fibers are hued with sandy brown and a dark tan color, in the sunlight she almost looks golden. Along side her left flank she holds a rather large scar, that runs down her left hind leg. Along with scar, her left fore paw is slightly twisted to the side, but this doesn't stop her abilities in any way. But even with all of her beauty, she doesn’t use it for anything, and due to past accidents, the damsel doesn’t see herself the way many others see her.


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History:
Twist was born into a healthy thriving pack, her mother and father were the Alpha's and didn't stick around much to care for their daughter. Her only companion as a young pup was the Beta at the time, named Danahi. He taught her the lessons that she needed to know for surviving, such as how to hunt, and how to fight, and all the rules she would have to follow if she was to follow in her mother's footsteps, and become the Alphas one day.

So by the age of two Twist was in position to become the next Beta, if her father chose her to be. But that soon all changed... An enemy pack came and destroyed their home, killing off all but Twist, her father, and a few warriors. Her father being heart broken, and defeated, ran away after the fight. The remaining warriors stood by Twist, but soon she told them to leave her alone and go find new homes. So being at the age of two the damsel set of for the far east. There she found an open area for her own territory and began her new life there. Everything seemed great, she got into minor fights with rouges her or there. But being young and strong, she was able to fight most of them off. But after a few more moons, she met a handsome brute who wandered into her territory, and the two fell into a loving relationship. They enjoyed life together for a while, and Twist became pregnant, but soon fell ill afterwards.. and lost the pups... After that the male left to go back to his home pack, and never returned. She soon got news that he had died in battle. So now, Twist is alone. She has no one to look after her. So she is strong willed and independent, but she misses the comfort she found by living in a pack, so she is hoping to find somewhere to join in this new land... ( I hope this is better, I just changed it a bit. I do realize that the daughter of an Alpha should have a higher teacher, thank you for pointing that out, and I also took out her injury, since those are not accepted as a beginner.. )


Joining Keys: Member posted the joining keys and have been removed for the fair joining of future members. - Elder Azul


How did you find Age? I found Age of the Wolves on the Top 50 Wolf RPG Site... And yeah, it seemed really interesting so here I am.

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Twist padded out from underneath the shade of a conifer. Her brawny legs tensed with pain from last night's slumber. She lowered front half to the ground in a sort of bowing position and stretched out every muscle that she could, before returning to standing. Her mind fogged over for a moment, before she remembered that she was going to check out the Eastern part of the new territory she had stumbled upon. Gathering what strength she had, from not eating in a few days, she set off in the opposite direction she had came from. Her audits perked to the chattering of the birds in the canopy of branches above her. She looked up in time to see a scrawny looking bird fly across her and land on a shrub ahead of her. She ignored it's loud cackling as she walked past. Her nostrils flared to the surrounded scent of the damp forest. She could smell where a herd of deer had passed through earlier in the morning, and the stale scent of a fox trailing after... The scents of the birds in heather around her, and the sweet scent of sap leaking from the trees. She paused for a moment, and lifted her snout to the air. The breeze carried a faint scent of another lupine in the same area as her. The fibers on her neckline bristled, and her claws flexed against the moist earth. Would they smell her? She wonder to herself, and then decided it was best to carry on...


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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 27th 2015, 23:59

Welcome Twist! But before you can be accepted, there are a few things you will need to adjust in order to join:

- First, you need an avatar. It must be 150 Pixels wide and no bigger than 400 Pixels tall.
- Please pick a rank. Warrior or Hunter are available.
- We do not allow any lavender colored eyes, even if it's just a hue. She can have gold, blue, green, silver or brown eyes.
- Her story doesn't really add up. Daughter of the Alphas, she would be training with at least a Delta if she was to be a Beta. She would need more training than from an Omega.
- Joining Keys are phrases found within the Rules. Go back, read them again, and once you find them, place the phrases here.

Once you do these things, another member of the Staff will check it over and hopefully accept you! But thank you for choosing Age!!
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 17:31

Hello! I have made some changes to my Joining Profile. They were at different times, so I apologize if it seems a bit scrambled now. But I hope this fixes everything... Sorry again for all the misunderstanding!

-Twist
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 17:43

Alrighty, so here's what we've got:

- Still missing an avatar.
- The names of wolves are not the joining keys. They are phrases found within the rules. Please read them again.

Fix these things and we will look over it again.
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 18:27

The changes have been made, sir.
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 18:56

The avatar showed up.. For some reason it wasn't at first... But just the one key!
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 18:58

Okay, I think I have found it? *enter nervous and stressed laugh here*
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PostSubject: Re: Twist's Bio Twist's Bio Icon_minitimeNovember 28th 2015, 19:10

Twist's Bio R0it

Now before you can get started, please add your wolf to the following pages:

- Name Claim
- Ranks
- Relationships
- Height Chart
- Character List

Once you have completed these things, please head to the border of your prospective pack and post!
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