Ariste [joining form]

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Name: Ariste

Gender: Female

Age: Two years

Pack: Erenyx

Rank Requested: Warrior

Appearance: She has thick, jet black fur that is long and silky. Her tail is very long, and feathered. Her muzzle is long, and flecked with snow white speckles. Her body is on the smaller side, and she is very agile. She has a broad-ish chest and shoulders, and slim haunches, legs small, but packed with power. Her paws and small, with closed toes. She has a scar from the crook of her left leg, up across her chest, to her pulse point, and another from the base of her ear, around and down to the corner of her eye. Small but sharp fangs. Her eyes are gold with silver flecks, but at night, appear to be silver with gold flecks.

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History: Her journey starts with her mother and father. Two wolves, her father Delta Male, and her mother an Omega, their coming pups were kept a secret. However her mother, Raenishae has a friend whom she entrusted with the secret of her pups, and their father. But her friend betrayed her when her own pups died, claiming Raenishae killed them in a jealous fit, as the pups were Khaler's. And so, the Omega was chased out of the pack, those who wished to kill her on her tail. Khaler stayed in the pack for some time, occasionally sneaking out to bring his love food in hopes the pups would stay healthy, always careful to get rid of her scent before returning to the pack. Within a mere two weeks, four pups were born. The first and most healthy was Kai, a relatively large male pup, inheriting his fathers genes. Next came the female Quinn, an average sized pup. Soon after that, her sister Senka was born, and last, Zanmitay. When Khaler heard of these pups, he immediately left his post of Elite at the time, to live with Raenishae and help raise their pups. They were safe and comfortable for the first four months of their life, before their father left them to find a new pack for the family, always returning to report his progress, and what the pack was like after a few days observing the wolves. Despite their parents' efforts, when they were five months old, the pups were taken from them, to an evil pack three days travel from those lands. A pack where all through their lives, pups were kept prisoner, forced to fight, and only the strongest survivors would be kept alive once they were two years old. They were given some time to mature, being trained, which was more like genuine self defense so they weren't killed, even though the older wolves were told specifically not to kill them. When the time come that they were allowed to fight, Senka won most fights in a determined scramble to keep her life, even if it meant taking another's, climbing higher and higher, her siblings did not fare as well, quickly being killed off in the fights. Only Senka, now named Ariste and her sister Quinn, now Adrienna, continued to win fights. As they grew, they were forced to fight bigger and bigger things, brutes a couple months older than them with more experience, anything that was a semi-fair fight, and whatever gave the wolves entertainment. Only the toughest survived, and Adrienna and Ariste became tougher, having to mature quicker than most pups. But when She was 19 months old, Ariste was forced to kill her only living sibling, her sister, as a test to see how great her survival drive was. She was devastated, and became a harsh killer, feeling no regret to kill another wolf, even attacking her guards when provoked. It became harder and harder to contain her hostility, and was often punished when she attacked someone. She sometimes went days before they would feed her. She escaped twice, only to be tracked down again. Finally, when

She was 21 months, She managed to escape during a storm, when She was left unattended for once, hidden in the darkness by her black fur. She ran without looking back, traveling for months to get as far away from her prison as she could. As she became more used to the wild, her Personality changed, but She will never fully get rid of her viciousness, her thirst for a wolf's blood, only hide it underneath a layer of cool calm. She won't necessarily pick fights, but will never back down with one. She won't ever be content with a rank, until she's at the top, and will continue to fight for it, like She had to when she was captured. She is a natural born leader, and always has trouble holding her tongue, but it would take some digging to find that, as she is so used to following orders. Even when wounded, if not in the presence of a higher rank, with always carry herself with an air of pride and superiority. She isn't selfish, and is very loyal if she finds the person worthy. While being very fierce, does, somewhere, have a nice streak. She has a very special soft spot for pups that is rapidly fading over time, but at the first of her arrival, is the only kindness you will see from her. Her personality will change as she slowly gets used to pack life.

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How did you find Age? Well I love wolves, and I wanted to get into some more serious roleplaying. I searched wolf rp, and found you on top 50 wolf RPs

Example Post: A black female wolf trotted through the forest, in search of prey. She growled, pinning her ears back in irritation. If only she knew the territories! She felt as if her inner compass had been destroyed because of being away so long, all sense of direction gone. She felt alone, lost, like a small pup separated from it's mother. She whined, as a particularly harsh bout of of wind seeped through her coat, biting her flesh. She shivered, and moved on, slower. Her eyes scanned the trees and bushes, her paw falls silent and quick. The wind blew, and she caught the scent of a nearby animal-a hare. She dropped to a crouch, and edged foreword, trying to determine the rabbit's whereabouts in the wind that was rapidly changing direction. After a few minutes, she finally detected it, west of her, and stalked swiftly towards it. She avoided kicking stones, or stepping on twigs, so as not to alert the animal to her presence.

She saw it, in a clearing, nibbling on grass. She lay in the bushes, quietly moving forward, inch by inch, until she was within leaping distance. She tensed her whole body, all her power going to her abdomen and hind legs. She waited quietly, before leaping out of the bushes, jaws wide. The hare had noticed the wolf a split second before it leaped, and sprung away with it's signature scream. It darted off, and the wolf quickly followed, not bothering to make her paw steps quiet.

The black figure darted through the trees, her long legs swiftly carrying her closer and closer to her destination. The fae's paws touched lightly on the ground, her strong legs pushing her foreword in chase. The white fur flashed before her eyes, and she forced her already aching legs to take longer bounds. Her tongue lolled, panting. She was soon forced to stop when she reached a territory boarder. She barked in anger, growling. Her chest heaved as she fought to catch her breath, looking around. Even though she had returned a little while ago, all the territories and packs were unfamiliar to her. She huffed grumpily, stalking away from the lost prey. She sniffed deeply, trying to catch scent of another animal.

Her stomach growled, reminding her she hadn't eaten in three days. She glanced back longingly, towards where the rabbit had disappeared. 'Maybe, just maybe, I can sneak over and just get it, and come right back...' She thought, licking her jowls hungrily. The cool breeze brushed against her long fur, ruffling it. She sniffed again, and took a hesitant step towards the borderline. 'Eventually I will have to join a pack...' She took another hesitant step towards the borderline. Her stomach growled once again, urging the fae on, and finally, She lifted her head, mouth forming a perfect 'O'. Her howl became louder as her voice pitched as high as it could go, then slowly dropped it's tone, until it ended. She smiled slightly, but fidgeted in worry. It was now or never.

Greetings and welcome to Age Of the Wolves! Now before your profile can be accepted, you must change some things:

- Your avatar must be changed to be a picture of your wolf.
- The description you have of her is inaccurate. No wolf has long claws since they have no use for that. They do not have large fangs which stick out of their mouths. If she is small, she would be more agile than strong.
- There are some grammatical errors and spelling as well. The only word which should be capitalized in the middle of a sentence is "I", so please correct all the "She"s and "Personality".
- Your history is not long enough. Please go into more detail on her life growing up.

Once you make these changes, we shall go through your profile once more.

Edit your own thread with the updated history. As far as the capitalization it would do it for all, not just some. Fix these things and try again.

Fix the capitalization in your sentences.
Names are proper nouns, not common.

Guest

Okay, I'm hoping this is the last time I have to say that I fixed my form

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Post at the border when ready. Either Lead Warrior Chiara or Delta Katyusha will be greeting you there.

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